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Post by matanchik on Aug 25, 2005 12:54:51 GMT
Desire
You can buy a yacht And you can buy a house You can buy a plane And a castle tower You can go to every place you want With daddy's cash he can afford
But you can never buy my Desire
You got protection Everywhere you go You learn in an elite school But have no talent at all You have learned that you don't need to effort But in real life you gonna have a fall
And you can never have my Desire
Mother always told me Marry a rich girl and have a Wealthy family
Mother, mother I don't care You never gonna change The way I am
And when our eyes met I putted down my gun
And when the sun set We sailed across the light
the lyrics are not so good but musically i think it's the best thing i ever recorded, check it out (at my webpage of course)
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Post by Adey on Aug 26, 2005 2:29:53 GMT
Thanks Mat. You know, if your songwriting/performances are recognised and celebrated at some stage in the future, some bod may remember that you have posted your earlier efforts here. Then there'll be grabbed and demo'd without your authority - someone will make a lot of money and just as happened to Kate, you may well suffer the embarassment of retrospective exposure..
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Post by matanchik on Aug 26, 2005 11:21:14 GMT
i'm not emberassed by my recent efforts at all, i really don't care now if someone will try to make money on them. all i want now is just to share my work
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Post by Adey on Aug 29, 2005 2:52:33 GMT
Needless to say, I wasn't suggesting that you needed to be ashamed of your work.
Just that you should guard the children of your creativity with your life..
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Post by matanchik on Sept 8, 2005 21:14:32 GMT
Just that you should guard the children of your creativity with your life.. don't be carried away . here are some of my other works: "the suicide"here we are don't need to ask why just measuring the years that past we believed in life but it's hard to adjust we never wanted to jump off a bridge but we had too looking from above at the flowers who once were men brave men and we believed in life and we believed in light but than the storm came and took it all away "a place called love"i got a map with all the right directions a manual with instructions i heard people talking about it behind my back (talking about) A place called love A place called hope A place called happiness it seems exciting i want to go there but i don't know how i searched in the hundred pubs i went through the hottest clubs the city lights are my home now until i'll find A place called love A place called hope A place called happiness it seems exciting i want to go there but i don't know how A linen light (through the darkness) a blonde figure (in the future) a little spark (between you and me) A place called love (in you and me) A place called hope (we'll see) A place called happiness come with me it's seems exciting it seems fun would you come with me to search it? "cafe girl"I met a girl in a café She looked like she came out From a cliché A golden hair Lipstick eyes Who seemed to cover up All her lies She was like the dawn When the sunrays shine through The open door I stared at her While she stared at me Maybe sometimes We can be Free Free with life Free from thoughts of Bounding love Free Free from pain Let our dirty secrets Float in the rain you can hear the songs on my webpage of course
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genesismalachi23
Reaching Out
thank you atomjack for thee avatar! (visit thee site) http://www.fusionanomaly.net ye shan't regret!
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Post by genesismalachi23 on Sept 10, 2005 22:55:33 GMT
Hey this poetry is pretty good E have been checking your site , your music and singing..... aahhh...Well.... it's pretty raw... but you've got heart so keep it up! Because
Kate says
Eat The Music
Split me open "ee" With devotion "yay" You put your hands in "ooh" And rip my heart out "ooh" Eat the music "ooh"
Does he conceal "ee" What he really feels? "yay" He's a woman at heart "ooh" And I love him for that "ooh" Let's split him open "ooh" Like a pomegranate "ee" Insides out "yay" All is revealed "ooh" Not only women bleed "ooh" Take the stone out "ee" Of the mango "yay" You put it in your mouth "ooh" And pull a plum out "ooh"
Take a papaya You like a guava? Grab a banana And a sultana Rip them to pieces With sticky fingers Split the banana Crush the sultana
Split 'em open "ee" With devotion "yay" You put your hands in "ooh" And rip their hearts out "ooh" Like a pomegranate "ee" Insides out "yay" He's a woman at heart "ooh" And love him for that "ooh"
Take a papaya You like a guava? Grab a banana And a sultana Rip 'em to pieces With sticky fingers Split the banana Crush the sultana
All emotion "ee" And with devotion "yay" You put your hands in "ooh" What ya thinking? "ooh" What am I singing? "ee" A song of seeds "yay" The food of love "ooh" Eat the music "ooh"
"ee, yay, ooh, ooh" "ee, yay, ooh, ooh" "ee, yay, ooh, ooh" "ee, yay, ooh, ooh" "ee, yay, ..." [fades]
------------------------------------------------------------------------ Copyright Kate Bush Music Ltd.
From: www.dongrays.com/kate-bush/
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Post by Adey on Sept 11, 2005 2:29:04 GMT
Must agree with GM on this one Mat. Nice to see you entering so deeply into the spirit of the thing.
I enjoyed some of your other works quoted here too.
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Post by matanchik on Sept 11, 2005 17:16:17 GMT
THANK YOU ALL
i have a question for all the songwriters here: what the order of your writing process: music first, lyrics first, the whole thing together or something else. i usually writes the music first with some idea of lyrics in mind, then i try to match those lyrics to the music
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Post by Adey on Sept 12, 2005 12:48:23 GMT
Good question -
Depends on the purpose of the song. If I'm writing to a specific requirement, then the words come first. More usually however, a musical phrase appears which I'll record (on score or digital recorder) and the mood of the piece itself will start to define the subject matter and earliest lyric drafts. I do actually prefer to write lyrics to music rather than vice-versa, but I'll work the other way if nec.
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Post by matanchik on Sept 17, 2005 21:33:22 GMT
"butterflies of the jars"
Looking through the window glass I see butterflies Inside Their jars
Paint the world in blue and green Said the teacher of the arts To the girl that didn't saw world She lived her life inside a jar
When you caught in the net There's no way back again When you caught in the net There's no way back again
"Yes, I believe in freedom of speech" Said the dictator to the crowd "But if you'll say something I disagree with,
You'll all be like butterflies Inside Their jars"
When you caught in the net There's no way back again When you caught in the net There's no way back again
Come on and dance around It's freedom time
I'll be dancing around Until they'll catch me too
Come on and dance around Open the jars
If you'll dance around You'll get a butterfly tattoo
first song written entirely on guitar!, it's in my webpage
"everything can happen" Another man was shot They say in the morning paper Bang! Bang! To the head And he was done
So hard to build a life So easy to take them Sometimes they don't Even tell you why
One day you laugh And one day you cry One day you win And one day you lose One day it's your birthday The next day is your funeral
Everything can happen To you
Everything can happen To you
The big city She can be so fun And she can choke You alive
For the people who live In the concrete jungle Living is Trying to survive
One day you in love And one day you alone One day you succeed And one day you fail One day it's your birthday The next day is your funeral
Everything can happen To you
Everything can happen To you
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Post by mannaudio on Apr 1, 2006 12:53:30 GMT
hi all, I've read this topic with a big interest. I compose as a hobby. I was wondering if any of you would like to help me to correct and finish this song? www.filefactory.com/get/f.php?f=e90bebbec47043708d8e2da1This is a song start that i recorded yesterday. You'll hear it is influenced by Erik Satie's piano works and Kate's albums. I hope you'll enjoy even if it's just a start. It features bass played by a friend of mine pianos flutes acoustic and electric guitars and last but not least lots of overdubs of my voice. It's called "unforgivers" at the moment. English is not my native language but i like to play with words... It talks of a man that have been cheating his girlfriend and analyze the situation of their relationship while she sleeps at his side. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- The lyrics: IntroHand collides in the gloom of the night Like an endless goodbye-waiting for the light Isolated together Unforgiving-each other. MainGive me a taste of "why!" Let me arouse your questionings Then leave me some more scars when you're ready. Let's face the devil together before crying for the sake of a late love. Truth is away.. Pain will go down as ever Unforgiving-each other ------------------------------------------------------------------------- That's it for the moment Fell free to add or cut, feedback and propositions welcome! Yann
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Post by matanchik on Jul 15, 2006 0:38:08 GMT
Travelogue
There isn't a sign That'll tell you Which way to go There isn't a guide book Or a leader
There isn't an iPod That'll make you feel nice You're on your own now
On your way back home
There is no god That'll tell you Right or wrong There isn't a Satan Either
And if you'll try To cross that wrecked bridge You'll fall deep down
You're on your way back home
go to my webpage (the little link at my sig), to hear the music that go with it
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Post by Barry SR Gowing on Apr 6, 2008 11:20:19 GMT
I wrote and recorded a song this afternoon. See what you think. The vocals and the mix are a little rough, but I'm done with it for today at least (it could all change tomorrow of course). The song is called Lament: www.mediafire.com/?dpcjv1o3y4gYou may have to wait a few seconds before the download becomes available (depending on the speed of your internet connection). If you have a popup blocker you may need to disable it for the mediafire site--Paul--
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Post by Al Truest on Apr 6, 2008 12:52:21 GMT
I wrote and recorded a song this afternoon. See what you think. The vocals and the mix are a little rough, but I'm done with it for today at least (it could all change tomorrow of course). The song is called Lament: www.mediafire.com/?dpcjv1o3y4gYou may have to wait a few seconds before the download becomes available (depending on the speed of your internet connection). If you have a popup blocker you may need to disable it for the mediafire site--Paul-- Well, I'm impressed. ... 'A masculine Kate Bush vocal delivery - cadence in the chorus - with laid back Steely Dan undercurrents. Nicely done. A bit 'King of the Mountain'-ish as well. There is real potential there. And the lyrics are in line with our discussions here of late.
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Apr 6, 2008 21:03:43 GMT
I am also very impressed, Paul. It does remind me a bit of 'King of the Mountain', with "the wind is blowing"... Good work.
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