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Post by rosabelbelieve on Jul 9, 2008 1:24:55 GMT
Here we go. A new thread.  For poetry written on the spot, that is. |
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Post by Al Truest on Jul 9, 2008 1:31:56 GMT
Here we go. A new thread. For poetry written on the spot, that is. O.K... Diamonds and pearls precious they seem I cast them aside in pursuit of my dreams the blood and the lust that their luminance hides would never be worthy of my spiritual bride. |
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Jul 9, 2008 1:38:20 GMT
No stone could contain the glow of love.
And the honeycomb is our wedding ring
the truest gold of all.
You tangled pollen in my hair
all winding down to sifting radiance
to flowery chirruping meadows
wheeling with swallows,
long silences, awaiting you, faraway.
As blossoms and honey are given
with every tear...
and mountains lift their gauzy veils of mist
upon our loving.hmm.. maybe this should be in Experiment IV.
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Post by Al Truest on Jul 9, 2008 1:44:38 GMT
No stone could contain the glow of love.
And the honeycomb is our wedding ring
the truest gold of all.
You tangled pollen in my hair
all winding down to sifting radiance
to flowery chirruping meadows
wheeling with swallows,
long silences, awaiting you, faraway.
As blossoms and honey are given
with every tear...
and mountains lift their gauzy veils of mist
upon our loving.
hmm.. maybe this should be in Experiment IV. May be...  It is really well crafted. Guys can't write like that.  (or maybe just not me) I'll need a minute... |
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Post by Al Truest on Jul 9, 2008 1:49:18 GMT
sweet summer sunlight
golden honey glint
fragrant flowered meadow
honeysuckle scent
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Jul 9, 2008 1:53:17 GMT
May be... It is really well crafted. Guys can't write like that. (or maybe just not me) I'll need a minute... Well, I cheated a bit - some of those lines are things I've already written, but not really made a finished poem out of yet. They'll probably get recycled.  I actually am going to start a poetry thread in Experiment IV. |
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Jul 9, 2008 1:54:01 GMT
sweet summer sunlight golden honey glint fragrant flowered meadow honeysuckle scent Beautiful. |
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For poetry written on the spot, that is.
It is really well crafted.
(or maybe just not me)