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Post by rosabelbelieve on Jun 16, 2008 15:53:20 GMT
Okay. I have mentioned several times around here that I was working on some poetry that was taking a long time. Those poems are finally finished, and I thought you guys might like to see them, even if they are rather (incredibly) long. The whole thing is a bit of a poem cycle, so it is broken into somewhat manageable parts. But I would be very grateful, again, to those who take the time to read.
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Jun 16, 2008 15:53:42 GMT
1.
This is the ember asleep.
It's as if I had bound myself to the dark middle house tied myself up at the spindle, the knarling heart And said: You cannot leave this place until your heart be crystal, and your words be twine. Your eyes be wisdom, tresses spidery grace and long again, all mended, endless as the sky.
You cannot be set free until your will is steel your thoughts immutable, immortal, as fine gems your silence frost-bound moveless in the dark Your dreams immense and perfect. All your limbs... are purified and scourged of dread disease Bones unchangeable, and core of mystery Regained. And taken softly to be safe forevermore.
Until the rare forbidden word of sacred call is known to you, you will be locked within And still as death, as moveless as a stone.
A shut-eyed flower, kissed by drowsiness kissed by numb wasps to closed dark eyes closed to the humming bees closed to the honey.
And pollen, stowed like treasure deep inside.
Like a secret kept a poem untold, untold and changeless, theftless lifeless, deathless, blind speechless, senseless in the bounds of mind.
Until you hear the dreaded summons of the king cruelest call, most beautiful of all, unspeakable You shall not see the spark of salt and fire in the ash You shall not know the secret ember locked within the dust of your dumb mortal house' silent breast
It is a tomb from which the flare will rise It is the muteness of the silent flint If you see this, dread and glory Dread, despair and the breath most of all. If you see this -
A spark will always, always, always come From the very slumber of the soul.
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Jun 16, 2008 15:54:21 GMT
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This is the spark.
This is the spark of such a puzzling dream where stars seem to tower in great hallucinations of desire, towers of stars, insatiable. Djinn's palaces and lambent caverns The magical and monstrous godlike beast And sent to be some silent wife of darkness the cowering Persephone, Scheherazade who with her lantern holds the night at bay As swooshing towers of stars rise up like wind with dreamlike brooms of white-hot gold and blinding red Rise up in summons spellbound, power beyond her - towers of stars like dragons, roaring with sleep
Roaring with the profoundest deep of slumber Slumber of a thousand years a thousand dreams.
As she awaits the rescue of some swallow some fiery winged-horse she knows will come and cowers with the very light she holds. Her summons bind to legend and unfold to snare like spidersilk as she grows old.
But now Only fire. The intensity of her incineration And her deep young prophetess-eyes over the red, red, luminous earth.
This is what happens when you forget This is what happens when you struggle to get free - She feels the flames of revelation quicken in her breast And the apocalyptic loom of electricity Takes hold, and catches fire in her hair. The leaden hand of dread melts in her heart and fears the reckless glory of her savior his wild crimson upset of mythology that tears the seamless fabric of her fate and trails a monstrous fire over the sea.
Her summons have awakened an ancient mystery of endless fire. Awestruck she is not afraid.
All the kingdom of sleep alight all the waters sighing in somnambulation and she wanders, stunned, O the Queen of the Underworld Mistress of silver, of the gold and the ruby's blood Silent queen, of the beauteous solemn stone. Inflammatory are the shaking skies Sonorous, symphonious and shuddering in the ecstasy of lightning and all the clouds boiling up like a war turned in on itself. All the mysterious electricity - And what a cacophonous symphony that is, yet she can't hear, can't see blind as the the birds that coo and swarm and stumble from deep chasms opening up, thunder breaking open her ears and fire and salt, fire and salt, fire and salt...
Calamity in scattered divination gets to the bottom of the bones breaks to the end of the flesh. Calamity of ash and of endless, endless dust and venomous lightning, breaks and breaks the earth The mystery of such a funeral pyre just to call her back to mortal life.
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There are ghosts streaming in the air in vaporous, sulphurous sheets, inescapable stench Of the dead also set free Oblivious, oblivious, and blind as she.
She can hardly see them. Wisdom hastens away from her narration scampers and scurries, abandons her in fire. If this is what it requires - If this is the price paid -
Monstrous flaming god, mysterious intensity! Flame tongue, speechless utterly unfathomed beast the claws of leaden dread that prelude death and afterwards the stomach is relief the endless endless darkness of the toothwomb can never hurt her, bodiless and fearless in her rage. All the fires as much consume her as they eat the charcoaled scars of trees It is her spine they spiral up in triumph and her heart the treasure they release to lead far from its silent lock and key its snapdragon, mandragora, and dreamless poppy in such an incandescence of delirium.
This much fire to loosen the garnets the stone-cold emeralds from her heart. This much fire to seek out the embers and cast her out from her kingdom of sleep and spiderwebs.
To draw her from her deeps...
Oh, Desire! Spangling blind overtaking aching spinetingling shine Nectar of diamonds, water of life, honey of milk of heaven unknown, unknown The hands held up, delirious, dew-dropped, seeking Alchemy, so feverish, so opaline, like snow - Salt seas and waters swallowing and flood as one their flames awake the beast, mortality. The hands clutch up, bee-stung, bedecked in honey-sweet dripping, helpless, rarest, golden, fire through a sieve.
O conflagration of macabre splendor! your immense spellbound immortal streaming flame Your immortal and balletic masquerade Clawed goddess, shattered amber of the moon Divining, mythologic, leaning in to take apart the spindling milk of bones to call the furious knife of destiny to leave us gleaming in the marrow of our silence. To leave us all immortal, past all pain.
No chalice holds the life of the living No cauldron takes the dust of the dead.
Persephone, Scheherazade the taloned tiger clawed within her chest the waters heaved and shuddered in her breast So luminous, so monstrous and macabre So opalescent and inflamed beyond all else.
Mysterious Past fear She took his hand.
I am falling apart in your arms of panoramic fire Sleepless, helpless Awestruck Unafraid.
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Jun 16, 2008 15:55:04 GMT
3.
Darling, that is all I remember.
All I can think of is fire, without even words.
It was the desperate flare of a desolate whirlwind desire It was your savage glory breaking and breaking my heart and seething, seething up in flowers over the dark underworld the solemnest tomb in blossom and panic of burning Desire, bone-breaking, swift-theft, blood-enchanting!
And it left my heart changed. O, it left my heart ravished. As dazed and aflame as the meadows sunstruck sparkling blind. Thundering with ponderous plundering pollen of bee-bliss thick with the itch of honey and drinking the golden dust of life and death all sifting together, unbounded. Yet as soon sprung from solitude, tied to another heart. As soon unlocked from silence sewn tenderly to a murmur So sudden is the hum of fire, of magic in your touch and alchemical subtlety, destiny deftness and skill.
To light the match unlatching frostbound palaces first a fire of blood and longing awakening a ghost aflame dream yearning. Knocks the doors down of my darkness with the radiant muscle of the sun.
All of a sudden is honey dripped helplessly as numb on the tongue as sleep and as sweet as nothingness.
But a honey to sting and to ache of its own sweetness So turned my sleep to dreams, of auroral fire, turning to sleeplessness.
So do the birds lift their secret wings and their spun song from the arches of earth dust and charcoal, sopor and smoke left behind when the trains snort like dragons through their cavernous tunnels and tear a dream from the sorrow of walls, mercilessly. All they can do is to rant and wonder aloud -
At the fire of cataclysm that has passed through them The miraculous spark of disaster gone from the stars And waters let loose and shining, skies limitless the meadows amurmur, encumbered with vibrating life.
A hidden heart still beating In the emerald slumber of the hills. Another aeon, safe.
A thousand years, the fever dreams are gone. And the hearth-flames give no hint of dangerous heat. And we forget the constant rhythm of blood. And we forget things underneath the green.
How very strange it is, to have seen something the merrymaking earth will not lend ear to.
A burning heart invisible or an atom aflame.
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Every oblivious leaf flowering up in peridot ignorance every lissome shoot lighting green fire from nothingness -
Knowing nothing at all, as it tumbles towards blossomy finish and thunders towards nectar-bound burdens of loveliness. Spins blissful to dust and to death and to blossom end Spins drowsy to slumber of pollen in swooning fields Sighs longing to the benumbing embrace of hills
As they begin to enfold me. As I begin to belong to them, and their dark welcoming arms sleep hollows, seeping green and unmanifest fire blossoms in yawning and sinking to sleep again.
What wild emerald arpeggio of abandon to flower so mindlessly blissful desire-entranced flower so endlessly, lamenting, circadian. As if they knew nothing of autumn's sacrificial pyre As if they knew nothing of pain, in numb ravishment.
The sinew-rounding winding down of destiny spiderweb cruel and gossamer tenderness. Setting down time to tear my heart open and eternity to bind it up again.
Setting down death. And the ultimate theft that would take you from me past all bounds of simple human hands. And blight any pure blossom with bloodshed. For even in birth there is bloodshed. Even in rain there is thirst and even in feast there is hunger. Even in sweetness is hurt.
That is why your dearness makes me weep. That is why needing is mortality.
All in this flare of tarantella blindness and this blindness of enchanted desire. The marrow-knot, of mystery, safe-tied.
This is the insatiable shimmer of energy scurrying delicately to dissipate in the flirtatious disappearing dance of butterflies. Or birdsong, blossom charm bluster from nothingness. Of a dream wakened within and insatiable.
Nothing to escape the blossom ravages With beating heart - And my heart beats.
It beats again, in reckless tumbling down and blood that blossoms on dark oxygen to nothingness. Enchanted always, in and out is breath again, and blossom, until death. And even then... the fire of decay As flowers narcoleptic nod and sink from pollen gold to silver, hoary-headed Blossoms like the winter's gossamer that drowsily come undone dust and summer snow and float in dreams of frost or starry spaces Stars come to dust in spiderweb and sleep.
What is this?
The underworld is going down in flowers and solitude becoming the perdition of my heart What is this? The inexplicable finding of the burning of breath in the dumb body of clay of the panicked flare of poetry in the silentest core of the stark stillness stunning in the storm of the ocean flame in flashing sapphire and the sun is the doomed lightning boom of thunder.
And I cannot escape them the drowning, flowering flooding, flame of breath and I cannot escape!
The blossom ravages. For my heart beats.
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Jun 16, 2008 15:55:48 GMT
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In my own world unending and with so many endings. In its clumsy cumbersome lovely grieving mending tenderness.
A salve of verdant slumbering staunching silk over the ancient, ancient wounds of land and ancient mouths of need all opened up by milk and feast and by the pollen kiss.
The rosy mouth of need is not yet closed by green slumber and pollen-heaviness And the beauty unbearable that can do nothing else but tremble, at last to sleep and oblivion.
Beauty unbearable, turns only of itself. Star dying of its own unbearable radiance Perfection expiring of its own luminosity. But always luminosity prevails...
Most unbearable of all is eternal luminosity. Immortal beauty, most excruciate for it never decays, and holds decay within.
Most unbearable is your mortal loveliness. Your worrisome finitude and your enduring heart. One is awe and the other is tenderness. And the flood of both, it feels so much the same.
As the fields of pollen drowse in gossamer a spiderweb to bandage blossom woe. And the stain of wine and blood is over everything, besotted dew-soaked poppies or flowers drowned in nectar and green, so blind towards destiny.
And I know our years in paradise are numbered. Until bearing beauty we can no longer stand. As blossoms nod and hair turns to frost-silver And love is doomed to ache and fall upon The soft lush looming of the mending green And finally to dreams and slumber, finally to bliss. Can I hold on to you so long enough to make it there, to bliss? Past loss and fear and mortal paradise.
In all this theft and plundering of summer as honeybees they plunder, pollen to honey pollen to their benumbing melodious thunder As songs are plundered from their ancient bliss. And bees bring slumber, bees bring blossom nod bring wasp-kiss, seal of dreams, and honeycomb... To kiss the blossoms as they shut their eyes. To kiss you as closed lashes bear us home.
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Yet when you have gone away Poetry bleeds within me, like an ancient wound - Smoldering heartbeat in the emerald slumber I can't bandage or staunch by any moderate means.
As blossoms nod and fall with thuds like heartbeats lost to us forever, fathomless, forgotten dreams In this slow benumbing month of summer slumber Poetry bleeds - at the hollow you touch, the chalice you fill.
The itch of gold grown drunk and lazy and loveliness is sinking into the lush looming green in this aeon of slowness. The slowness of our aeons as they fall like heartbeats from our paradise.
In this summer of need grown mute with bounty kisses, blesses, blushing blossoms as they shut their eyes to wasps and slumber-bearing bumblebees come humming, honey-buried, in the fields swarm so hypnotic and with such deafening glory. I long for this. A paradise in loss forever...
I long for this.
To kiss the blossoms as they shut their eyes To kiss the honey sealing in the comb To kiss the dying poems that close to dreams To kiss you as your eyes are shut to me.
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Jun 16, 2008 15:56:30 GMT
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And bless you, every inch of you! And salve the very darkest wound of living and kiss the mouth of hunger into bliss and kiss your sleeplessness to slumber...
As swollen heady hills come rolling inwards the swelling emerald hills in their shawls of green dear hills of silence, holding beating heart.
Clouds skimming like flat-bottomed boats abounding from stainless blue come drifting faraway - from oceans and the sagas of the sky to set down their knots and sinews down within the limits of the land. As we are bound here fast in our very heartstrings, to this looming green and this doomed love, and bleeding poetry.
An old wound healing in the rust of the leaves a sweetness sealing, like a honeycomb
In the lissome doomed solfeggio of leaves as symphonious tendrils they tower to flower-end. My poem isn't done. It keeps bleeding and tumbling towards loss and blossom finish - and lurching to luminous slumber in a thunder of glory - green ravagement of an unspeakable bliss this bliss of finish, kiss of shutting eyes.
And only then may we pass onward dreaming. If you will keep your cherished hand in mine.
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Jun 16, 2008 15:57:46 GMT
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To think a year has passed over us and the dandelions climb somnolently over the green in their encumbering and pollen-laden safekeeping. A summer dream so slowly swaddling in blissful emerald slumber tenderness A smoldering wound in this ancient heart enfolded in aeons of sleep, and aeons of time.
Beauty tumbling of itself to silverness and hoary-headed hidden gossamer. The drowsy swandown snow of our descent and the descent of summer, slumber's kiss. Aeons, aeons... I could mark them on the drum of a heart Or the scrawling inkmarks of an anguished page. Or loveletters from long ago, still living. It's so beautiful, that they come here, always.
And that love could endure like some spiritual citadel in vanquishing green that tramples whole cities underfoot.
My desire, the ocean turns in its bed of stones to tenderness in the constancy of our dear bracing descent and words of stone or coral, tossed anchorless but safe. As your heart is safe in its destiny.
And her tasseled bounty finds its words in silent kindness, and blameless severance Of blossom nod, and a subtle poem Gnawing stonelike in the inmost heart.
Subtle song of distant violin and clothes hung out to dry, so charmingly as if a heart, a poem, a city, love story, endures and beholds all of this savage glory.
A city... what nostalgia. A countryside of sleepy green and meadow sprawl Where the poet pauses often as she writes and you embrace, the way you'd always meant to you say the words, so slowly, and so numbered, like a loss. And it is the knowledge of our fleeing tenderness.
And it is a promise to seal us together in the abyss of eternity.
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A heart at anchor, in the limits of this land and dragged down with honey and burdensome with fruit. Deft sempstress of necessity. Her silent hand weaves so much more slowly, now, descending Gentleness unrushed, and cruelty softened in our green slumber and our mercy of dreams. Wild strawberries reddening the fields, like stars -
Dearest, we need not keep them. Words once so worrisome are no longer our relentless destiny.
Our destiny is loss. Our destiny is wasp-kiss, and dreams. Beauty we cannot bear forever and in the end, only unspoken words that we can hold on to. Necessity a word that will not let us go.
Necessity is simple now, I promise you the world is so much slower spinning down than it is in the swiftness of flower rise and of blossom theft and ravages.
And there is something here, beyond her and beyond our temporal emerald aeon and the drowsy rampage of blossom end. Beyond the trampling longing, I promise, is safety - I promise you, you'll find me there, past want and time your heart be safe and its wounds salved and kissed.
To kiss the blossoms as they shut their eyes to kiss you as your eyes are shut to me.
Past this solemn wasp-blessing, past this muteness and this finish. You will find me. Lost already, touched by death or touched by falling lost and safe, oblivion of your arms!
The lustre of my hair is wound with grey though it is hidden, as the earth hides snow and silence holds the sweet inevitable Necessity... that fields are going down from blossoming to drowsiness to silver narcoleptic tenderness knee-deep in slumber knee-deep in desire, knee-deep in stinging dreams! Overtaken with the swarming drone of bees. To kiss the blossoms as they shut their eyes to bear us safely past our paradise.
Your warmest, safest heart beyond all else as wanderlust, it settles to this pretty place where we set down our weary limbs within the pollen-laden limits of the land.
Having known fire, having known truly terror. Having known floods and conflagrations. Have known the spark of love miraculous disastrous, and eternal. As immortal water pours into our dreams and veins, awakenings.
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This, we stand amid.
The numb and lovely longing falling down in flower and in silver and in tenderness all trance of living, emerald vertigo to vertigo in trembling green salvation and in the welkin beholds all of this -
The poem that clenches us to dwelling in this land these lulling poppies, mooring stone roots, green millinery and luminous oblivion come undone or magic sealed within a honeycomb.
Poem of no end, my darling poem ever bleeding to you.
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These are the hills of time as they begin to enfold me.
Strewn with flowers, your arms drunk with desire and tangling together in the yawning slowness of time coming over us vital and cumbersome and inevitable that loveliness sinks into the lush looming green.
Bearing salvation blissful in all of our ravages so much slower in its falling down.
Lulling where I have hurt to love you and sealing poem's blood thunder in the heart sealing the ache of honey from endless dripping... the bees come over us, so cobweb soft the gossamer... of wisdom, swanfeather fate.
At rest is wanderlust, settled like pollen dust at rest is avian spun-silver chantery at rest the shimmering catch of the butterflies no longer blind in desire, sudden now soaked, stand here waiting and knowing.
Knowing in the serenity of the inevitable Knowing you must return, to this this knot that holds us both forever.
I know you must return and know we must come tumbling like stars to blossom dust.
And even when I swooned among the starry dawdling of dandelions, and meadows measureless abloom. Blowsy with glory and cumbersome with beauty! and tears fall like dewdrops to the listening earth same earth beneath us, and is always that. Same sky above us, and always.
And do you know what? I love you better now.
Looking out over meadows and drowsy fields dust of gold or silver, and thinking, this is where I want to be, tangled with pollen in your arms touched with life and tumbling down garlanded with riddles and flowers, made holy with them.
Holy lush green And the summoned red of our blushing blood Gold of the pollen and sun White as the bones of loving and knowing all here, white as swandown, white as stars and white as time.
I promise you - There is a silver under all of this there is a silent silver there to take us in when nothing else will.
A silver to bind up wounds and a silver to bind up wings.
The kiss of sleep. And death, my dear the gentlest touch.
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Jun 16, 2008 15:58:41 GMT
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Truth rearing up like the harsh stone-cold sapphire sea. Truth like briny tangle and boulders of shouldering stones as they lose their footing. Truth, like a prophetess Arose in the tempest blood and chanted her own death and her dread destiny out.
And destiny towered over the thundering waves while I woke faraway in the land's lock dream-tossed and shaking and haunted with visions of fire! Haunted by my ancient disasters, my sparks and my salt of desire. Dreams of stars falling and dreams of wasp blossom eyes. Dreams full of harm as they toss in their stony sea-cradle.
Where is our end? We must go through. I cannot let you go. All waters, foaming, full of poesis, trampling and turning in their beds of stone and muscle and glory and shifting skin.
In my dreams it bears me, flower-trodden to you unraveling hair, nets of drowning, webs of veins in lapis lazuli - eyes themselves oceans heart become driftwood, tears and not rain on my face.
In dreams, I call disaster down from the sky. Disaster and grief in the curse of stars falling from heaven, and swarms of bees, spiders, that would bind up a breath in silver and golden locks. Heart's veins ripped open - Prophetess eyes, call down the end of the world. The end of the world that would plumb and wash us clean in its selfless theft and its excruciate pain.
These are my dreams of awe my dreams of revelation.
Flood of baptismal ultramarine and pain and love in every drop of blood of being a woman... Prophetess of flames and hills and waters and blossoms... I am, and death that will come only of my selfless hand. Blood staining sticky as honey, sweet burning Heart charmed open like a pomegranate.
And in my dreams I rise again, for I am all. And you will find me there, past want and time. And you will find me there past vengeful need. And you will find me there all past desire. And you will find me there, undersea city And past all grief, for grief cannot endure.
For even in slumber Our blood rushes like rivers in reverie over stone and bone.
We will endure this. Somewhere in this terror is salvation. And we may find it, if in awe we tremble But fear is burned away in stumbling radiance! Our dim nocturnal sea-soaked journey undertaken In veils of mist kept safe, gauze swaddling stars Enrapt in the halo of light you surround me with. We may pass here. This perilous mist-land in which even stars must gasp and die.
To kiss the blossoms as they shut their eyes. To kiss the stars in falling to demise Stars kissed with fog and full of loss and sleep Their twinkling milky eyes all closed to bliss.
And if you hold my hand you will be safe.
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And these are dreams.
These are the ravishing spectres and mirages and the illusions that hold fast so many eyes. Nets and webs of them, thorned and bejewelled, tossed up from the bedraggling sea that would have me sink. Visions of loss and ravings of eternity flash without words, disastrous miraculous flare!
Like summer lightning in fathomless velocity quick as an arrow, supple as silver water yet uprooting the terrible stormcloudy boulders yet taking the towers of leaden magnificence down, crumbling down, into loss and a sloughing of skins.
Immemorial stone-ships with footsteps of primeval thunder! lose their leaden borders and their mortal seams In a ruinous clamor like artillery Golden grandeur of lightning! A storm is prophecy, stern sweeping revelation Unstirred sky and eternal stone.
Oceans toss within our blood and we are soaked. Fires rage within living and we are burning, alight. As storms move southwards, bearing with them harm. Pass in the drone of thunder, hypnotic and deep. I can hardly believe the way storms pass over the land. I can hardly believe the way dreams pass over a body.
I can hardly believe that I wake the warmth of a heartbeat and your sweetest hand.
Tempests leave us with nothing but pure plenty and cities drowsing in irrepressible green. And restfulness, so truly and profoundly laid down within the limits of time and space.
And leave us with nothing but the spirit of love that is the spark of tender, looming green that is the strike of the star-crushing thunder. And the dawn that endures the stormy feet of the mystic giants of heaven, as they lumber and stomp. Ravaged undersea stone castle of the imperishable anchored in the vaults of the firmament, anchored in awe.
Our love as a sapphire city endures even a green that tramples cities underfoot. Holy, precious citadel of the spirit of love endures the weathered promise of eternity.
And storms are such a subtle comfort for in the end - they are promises. Safe fortress house of a human heart.
In twinkling nets lie promises all around us. In webs of gold and spiritual bonds. As we are shackled to sweetness, and drowsy with wings - dreams of wings bound up in silver, perfect and big Touched silently at the feathers with periwinkle a promise of pure love and true love, all touched with dusk. In twinkling star-interwoven sapphire beds in misty-eyed sparkling slumberous swandown nests.
Who ever knew a promise could be such an anchor. Who ever knew the spirit of love could catch stars like fireflies, like fishes of the sky - And keep hearts beating together, in safety and in awe.
Promises are the seal of stars in an eye Promises are the last syllables of destiny. The talismans of things you've said to me... are precious beyond all of my belief.
Precious and strong as spidersilk strung with dew Delicate as the wing of moths, rare as their touch. Coming from nowhere among the wild paintbrush. Stoking its furnaces of flower over the hills. Charring the hillsides with fiery radiance and stitching us back into fire and burning salvation. Strewing a savage honey over smoldering heart...
I know. I saw them. So beautiful I nearly called your name.
Amber and ruby snatched from the sun's crown Savage incantation and flammable trance Salvation in fiery dreams and words of glory dark hand and swift turn of the wrist - mortality. Desire trampling cities underfoot, insatiable. Strange dreams catching fire in my hair and all over me. Once I took your hand - and walked through fire, harmless, unafraid.
So underfoot - your treasured, precious heart of love enduring. Underfoot prevailing, cherished talisman.
For a word of tenderness is stowed within the flames of blossom wanting ravages.
Your heart beneath in bondage of a silvern silk. As far as I can see, the drowsy fields and summer drowning in her own blossom lament In drowsy whispering fields that come to dust and a thousand forsaken wishes stolen by wind. Somnolent, swathing, silken and solemn silver come swallowing the earth in a web of dreams.
But I will keep you in the drowning dreams I will keep you in the swarm of silver and gossamer frost. In summer's death, in bandagement of green.
Love is the hope of freight trains pounding forward in kindness And I ran, skirts and hair windblown, all in awe and in tenderness! That love is tangible halo, and all our senses come back to this. Love as the sweetest net, to reel in poems and stars and butterflies.. And a poem that's not mine as it trembles and glows in my hands. And hope trembles onwards in grace and in hopelessness as a gift I can't fathom lies still and speechless as a sphinx.
Our precious city. Dear immortal city of no end! No dream could wash away, no burden bend.
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Post by Al Truest on Jun 17, 2008 0:11:44 GMT
My gosh Rosa you've been busy. I will comment more after reading more thoroughly. But my first impression is that this is very good work. The imagery and the flow are just superb.
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Jun 17, 2008 0:21:18 GMT
Thank you so much. I thought that you might like them.
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Post by Barry SR Gowing on Jun 17, 2008 8:22:27 GMT
Oh rosa, I think you may have outdone yourself!
I've read it all, but I think I've only properly absorbed the first three parts at this point, so it will take some time to really come to grips with the whole poem. It's quite astounding though
--Paul--
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Jun 17, 2008 16:16:56 GMT
Wow, thank you! I'm glad that the effort they took seems to have paid off, and I am rather proud of them myself. ;D
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Post by tannis on Jun 17, 2008 17:37:55 GMT
Hello Rosa, I agree, it's wonderful work! I have read it through and printed a copy to read at leisure, as it's quite an epic! Well Done!
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Jun 17, 2008 18:32:38 GMT
Thank you so much! I'm flattered that you printed a copy and would care to read it at leisure.
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