Some of my recent stuff...

[Iago]

Nice to see you writing again. I'm never really sure where you're coming from. Especially when you compare these pieces. But, that it is honest and heartfelt is evident. Keep it up.

[CopyOfCpt (just say Cor)]

I like it, in some way I can feel you saying it to me... now don't panic! I won't evolve in some person who will hunt you down in Aberdeen and stalk you. To me that is a sign of good writing, the invitation to get into the story/poem.