Iago
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Post by Iago on Jan 19, 2005 2:07:47 GMT
Feminine
Evangelic course erroneous
sanctimonious self flagellations
single engendered divine examples
shun nuturing godlike empowerment
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Post by Iago on Jan 22, 2005 15:53:36 GMT
why, you'd die
everlasting guise emplies
something greater realized
death hovers so ominous,
shall loom mellifluous.
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Post by Al Truest on Jan 22, 2005 15:57:09 GMT
Real poets use proper grammar.  End' with the adverb.  |
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Post by Iago on Jan 23, 2005 3:32:39 GMT
now
we embrace efforts shortsighted
dreams sublime
escaping grim mundaneness
sacrificing grace
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Post by Iago on Feb 3, 2005 3:28:36 GMT
Societies
sheer ravaging greed directs societies
selfish hoarding gluttonous societies
shameful lords, spineless societies
souless self-serving graceless societies.
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Post by Iago on Mar 5, 2005 2:04:28 GMT
Smite
Ethereal love enchants sublimely
yet tumultuous sojourns surrender reality
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Post by Al Truest on Mar 9, 2005 22:53:30 GMT
Top Ten Thread - please reply
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Post by Al Truest on Mar 12, 2005 2:22:04 GMT
Republicani
Indelible epiphany, yon neverending guile
epic con-artist tactics sell laissez-faire ensile.
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Post by Iago on Mar 12, 2005 2:35:49 GMT
Close but no cigar. 'Can't modify laissez-faire with a transitive verb, Nice try.  |
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Post by Al Truest on Mar 12, 2005 2:51:01 GMT
Close but no cigar. 'Can't modify laissez-faire with a transitive verb, Nice try. Yeah...but it rhymes and refers to silo's and stockpiles, relevant to the theme. Is this poetic license or poor grammar? |
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Post by Al Truest on Mar 12, 2005 3:09:08 GMT
Pills
Serene encounters serve empathetic calm
Mood-enhancing guidance
establishes sympathetic cause |
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Post by Al Truest on Mar 12, 2005 3:24:53 GMT
Norm
Most territorial license
envolves selfish hateful lust
toiling greed-filled dynamo's
seem most triumphant
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Post by Al Truest on Mar 17, 2005 23:38:21 GMT
Laura's recent post about synchroncity made me think about a previous 2 line poem that needed expanding:
Lucid Dreamer
Reminscient travels, sentient truth hommage
escaping grand delusions' symbiotic cause
Lucid dreamer rise empowered, dream morosely yet
to open new worlds subconsciously, yielding glorious sentiment
Tangent travels surreptitous, sojourns sanctified,
dreams' sympathetic calling, grants synchroncity.
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Post by Al Truest on Apr 20, 2005 0:27:57 GMT
Habitual
Love ends sadly
yet tommorow we explore
endeavoring guile
emotional liasons
sympathetic coldness
sadness surrounds
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Post by Iago on May 7, 2005 2:25:58 GMT
Oh
How would dreaming glorify your realm?
Maybe everything's surreal?
Lonliness seeps seriptiously yet
to open new world's
Coupling's
Smoldering guttural lamentations
sultry yearning gratification
numbing gushing grinding glory
yields someone else's story
Find Drama
absolve emotion's sting - give everything
get tumulteous - savor rancourous seething
grasp passion - nuture empathy
your realty's singular - relish humanity.
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End' with the adverb. 
