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Post by Al Truest on Mar 16, 2008 2:57:11 GMT
Yes, it really forces you to use inventive words.. I had to google 'eloigning'- couldn't find the definition at dictionary.com. So thank you for expanding my vocabulary.  It also did not clear the 'spellcheck' dictionary here.   |
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Mar 16, 2008 23:13:47 GMT
LOL, I love it when spellcheck doesn't recognize words that I use... it makes me feel so superior! ;D Eloigning is a very nice word, by the way. I think I'll have to use it in the future.
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Iago
Reaching Out
Stepping out off the page.....
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Post by Iago on Apr 10, 2008 21:49:17 GMT
Muon
neutrinos streaking galactically
you understand data amorphously
you unintentionally yield demonstrably
yet time evolves serendipitously.
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Apr 10, 2008 22:58:14 GMT
Muon neutrinos streaking galactically you understand data amorphously you unintentionally yield demonstrably yet time evolves serendipitously. I love the line 'yet time evolves serendipitously.'  |
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Adena
Moving
This time around we dance - we're chosen ones
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Post by Adena on Apr 25, 2008 15:55:18 GMT
Lauren never rose, ever.
Regrettably, yes, she slighted.
Don't tell Lauren.
No signs showing great thoughts.
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Apr 25, 2008 16:15:33 GMT
Very good effort, Adena. You must be a natural at these. |
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Post by Al Truest on Apr 25, 2008 16:48:39 GMT
Adena's summon Now we expect total liberation not timid didactic consternation next time exclaim more edification new world dynamic consumation Thanks for posting here Adena. |
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Adena
Moving
This time around we dance - we're chosen ones
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Post by Adena on Apr 26, 2008 13:59:05 GMT
The etching
Grass stretching
Girls sketching
Got that.
Moon never runs
Smurf fetching guns
Sizzling golden nuns
Same elven names.
I like the idea of a non-regular sausage poem better than that of a regualr one. Still, some of the ones here are fabulous. And thanks for the welcomes.
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Post by Al Truest on Apr 26, 2008 16:22:46 GMT
The etching Grass stretching Girls sketching Got that. Moon never runs Smurf fetching guns Sizzling golden nuns Same elven names. I like the idea of a non-regular sausage poem better than that of a regualr one. Still, some of the ones here are fabulous. And thanks for the welcomes. Damn. I like it. fluff fetching girls smile evil lads smirk ketchup popsicle's smudges, staining grandma's skirt Like that? |
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Adena
Moving
This time around we dance - we're chosen ones
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Post by Adena on Apr 26, 2008 17:50:35 GMT
Oh yes, good one.
Politics saves satire
every yarn needled
Nation, nukes, surplus.
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Post by Barry SR Gowing on Apr 27, 2008 4:09:27 GMT
Do I have to? Oh, all right:
Lyrics saunter rythmically
Yet they yield dreamish hypnotic
Critiqued, decisive, erotic
Connect thou umbilically
--Paul--
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Post by Al Truest on Apr 27, 2008 9:32:32 GMT
Do I have to? Oh, all right: Lyrics move me rythmically Yet still remain hypnotic Critiqued, cool and erotic Connect with me umbilically --Paul-- ^ Ta, ta-ta Fenby.  Good though your poem is; "Sausage" poetry is distinguished by each ending and subsequent letter of each word being the same (like 'link' sausage). e.g., she-eats-shrimp-passionately... |
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Post by Barry SR Gowing on Apr 27, 2008 13:50:14 GMT
Good though your poem is; "Sausage" poetry is distinguished by each ending and subsequent letter of each word being the same (like 'link' sausage). e.g., she-eats-shrimp-passionately... Oh I though it was just the ends of lines - beginning of the next line. How unobservant of me!  However, you will notice that I have now edited the poem slightly to meet your specifications ... each word linking. But still essentially the same poem.  --Paul-- |
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Post by Al Truest on Apr 27, 2008 14:34:38 GMT
Good though your poem is; "Sausage" poetry is distinguished by each ending and subsequent letter of each word being the same (like 'link' sausage). e.g., she-eats-shrimp-passionately... Oh I though it was just the ends of lines - beginning of the next line. How unobservant of me! However, you will notice that I have now edited the poem slightly to meet your specifications ... each word linking. But still essentially the same poem. --Paul-- Brilliant edit. I like it even better. |
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Post by rosabelbelieve on Apr 27, 2008 16:32:38 GMT
Impressive, Paul. I suppose everyone's going to expect me to try one now... Well, I'll see what I can do. |
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Good though your poem is; "Sausage" poetry is distinguished by each ending and subsequent letter of each word being the same (like 'link' sausage). e.g., she-eats-shrimp-passionately...