Sausage Poetry

[Al Truest]

I actually was wanting to continue the thread as well to post what I found to be frickin hilarious in my research -


click here

Paul this wasn't you was it?

[karmamama]

altruest said:

I actually was wanting to continue the tread as well to post what I found to be frickin hilarious in my research -


click here

Paul this wasn't you was it?

Better TREAD carefully then

[Al Truest]

karmamama said:

altruest said:

I actually was wanting to continue the tread as well to post what I found to be frickin hilarious in my research -


click here

Paul this wasn't you was it?

Better TREAD carefully then

Everybody's an editor. This one slipped through spell check.

[Sheila]

So I guess my veggie sausage poem was a no go then? Fine, extra pepperoni please...

(I was trying to continue the tread thread too but okay whatever.)

[Al Truest]

sheila said:

So I guess my veggie sausage poem was a no go then? Fine, extra pepperoni please...

(I was trying to continue the tread thread too but okay whatever.)

Jeez, who said anything about a 'no go'. Most of my poetry gets little or no response. Ya gotta just keep chugging along,

[Sheila]

altruest said:

Jeez, who said anything about a 'no go'. Most of my poetry gets little or no response. Ya gotta just keep chugging along,

Oui there I go again, aye, sensitive Little (gonna quote Barbarella here) "goober"! Hey, we have a plane in the middle of the street here! (Yeah what does that have to do with the price of rice in China, Sheila? ::grabs at straws:

Misinterpretation needlessly yields
sensitive emotions
sometimes successfully
yanking good discussion
never realizing god**nm misunderstandings
solidifying grotesque evaluation
not terrific clarification
notorious surmounting gushing
golden nuances
soul lost, therein neverending.

[Al Truest]

sheila said:

altruest said:

Jeez, who said anything about a 'no go'. Most of my poetry gets little or no response. Ya gotta just keep chugging along,

Oui there I go again, aye, sensitive Little (gonna quote Barbarella here) "goober"! Hey, we have a plane in the middle of the street here! (Yeah what does that have to do with the price of rice in China, Sheila? ::grabs at straws:

Misinterpretation needlessly yields
sensitive emotions
sometimes successfully
yanking good discussion
never realizing god**nm misunderstandings
solidifying grotesque evaluation
not terrific clarification
notorious surmounting gushing
golden nuances
soul lost, therein neverending.

That's the most wonderful poem ever written!



Sorry, was that over the top. ;D Actually it is very good. Making sense and especially having any kind of rhyme or reason is very difficult with this form. You do seem to have a knack for it. Keep it up and push the envelope. I have gotten much better (I think, anyway ) just by experimenting. You can't let no comment stop you. Unless people start start sending private messages for me to hang it up, I will continue to write. I must however assume that with over 3, 500 views in the poetry threads that people are reading. Sometimes folks will read and admire without comment. I'd like to hear some general commentary from other members that read the creative writing threads and rarely if ever comment. Do you guys see these as interesting or just annoying. You don't need to be specific to any person or entry; but some constructive criticism or encouragement would be helpful.

[Al Truest]

altruest said:

sheila said:

Oui there I go again, aye, sensitive Little (gonna quote Barbarella here) "goober"! Hey, we have a plane in the middle of the street here! (Yeah what does that have to do with the price of rice in China, Sheila? ::grabs at straws:

Misinterpretation needlessly yields
sensitive emotions
sometimes successfully
yanking good discussion
never realizing god**nm misunderstandings
solidifying grotesque evaluation
not terrific clarification
notorious surmounting gushing
golden nuances
soul lost, therein neverending.

That's the most wonderful poem ever written!



Sorry, was that over the top. ;D Actually it is very good. Making sense and especially having any kind of rhyme or reason is very difficult with this form. You do seem to have a knack for it. Keep it up and push the envelope. I have gotten much better (I think, anyway ) just by experimenting. You can't let no comment stop you. Unless people start start sending private messages for me to hang it up, I will continue to write. I must however assume that with over 3, 500 views in the poetry threads that people are reading. Sometimes folks will read and admire without comment. I'd like to hear some general commentary from other members that read the creative writing threads and rarely if ever comment. Do you guys see these as interesting or just annoying. You don't need to be specific to any person or entry; but some constructive criticism or encouragement would be helpful.

I'd like to comment on the fact that for someone who professes to offer valid commentary that this cited post reflects a maladroit proliferation of the word 'comment' or it's derivative. Any other comments? (sorry for the lazy editing)

[Adey]

I'll comment for what it's worth..

I do like to read the creative writing threads - infact I read every post - and have enjoyed some of the work greatly. However, I couldn't possibly comment on every new piece of work. With the best will in the world I'd either run out of things to say or would come across as some second rate editor/ill-informed critic with nothing better to do other than inflicting my unqualified opinion on the very personal work that folks here are sharing. I'll certainly comment on something that particularly moves me, or try and encourage a.n.other who's new to the game here.

I hope that's sufficient - certainly it's the best way in which I can support these threads. I have even been known to contribute myself on rare occasions..

[lost boy]

charisma assaults
severe erudition numbs
salacious sentiments sever relationships
salesmanship precludes salvation now.

[Uno]

Still lamentations soar
raucous sentiments shrill
libations sublimations
sympathetic cause
escalation non-proliferation
needless synergy yields.

[LilyWhite]

Al Truest, for what it's worth, I read and love your poetry but don't comment for fear my comments would sound stupid. I don't just want to post "Hey that's great!" but sometimes I feel that way and have nothing more intellegent to say. In fact this may turn out bad but I am going to attempt one of these inspired by the song Aerial. Forgive me I am a novice.

Bird, deep purple,
eloquently yips so onward
Delicious sounds, singing gorgeous
songs.
Savoring glorious surreal listening
Gone eternally?

[Al Truest]

Thank you Lily. I'll continue to post as though I had good sense. And I do enjoy when others contribute here. Your foray was remarkably good.

[Al Truest]

Nurses


Sphygnomonometer
read dat thermometer
regulate environments
succor requirements
shave epidermis
shove enema apparatus
supplement therapies
summarize Euripides

[LilyWhite]

Yikes! That's why I won't even watch ER let alone get into the medical business! I enjoyed the grotesqueness nonetheless. And about your comment:

Thank kindly you understandingly yelling "GO" Onward do our reticence eat through hellish hovering globs sadly yearning goodness---Sustain!